V107高中毕业后先工作再上大学的利弊
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写在前面：利用在雅思考试中心的有利条件，我发现文章结构占不少分，这也符合readable的评分标准，但往往又为很多考生所忽视。现再献一篇-----V107
的高分作文，让考生参考这种题型的结构。
---------广州IELTS考试中心专职写作老师赖劲松
Version 107 Some people believe that students who want to attend colleges or
universities after graduation from high school should spend one year taking a
job to gain work experience or traveling to enlarge their vision. You should
use specific reasons to state the advantage and disadvantage of this
practice.
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Introduction (45 words)
It is reported that average families' expenditure on education is increasing.
Yet how to educate children in a right way always obsessively bothers us. A
practice has been suggested that students should spend one year working or
traveling to gain practical experiences before taking tertiary education.
topic sentence 1 (14 words) There are some advantages to taking one year to
work or
travel after high-school education.
Supporting sentences: (85 words)
In general, high-school graduates are less than 20 years old without
professional knowledge. When they take their places in society, only the
low-paid or laborious job offers are available. After one year of hardships
and humiliations, their desire for being equipped with specialized knowledge
would inevitably grow greater, turning into powerful force to drive them on
cherishing their further education. Next, travel can enlarge one's vision,
and students can apply what they have seen or heard into their college
curriculums/subjects, helping them better understand theoretical knowledge.
BODY2(topic sentence2 (16 words)
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to working or traveling
before going to university Supporting sentences( 102words)
First, high-school graduates are too young to distinguish the good from the
bad. It is common that Generation Young likes hanging out with friends; they
move from one group to another and their friendships change over a period of
a few weeks or months.
Therefore, in society the probability of getting involved with evildoers is
pretty high. It is said that the young are easy to become illegal drugs
takers if misleading guidance is conducted. Second, to travel for one year is
too expensive for people from all walks of life, not to mention that
students' financial sources are chiefly from their parents.
(**additional point: Besides, one-year travel means you have to be on a move
for a long period from one city to another, even from one nation to another.
Eventually you may not be able to calm down to concentrate on your studies
after the journey.**)
Conclusion 2 (62 words)
In conclusion, advantages of working or traveling for a long time before
further education are obvious but not doable. In my opinion, to work at a
very young age might result a hazardous social life and to travel for one
year will increase financial burden to the family, hence to educate children
in a row can mould them into sensible human resources.
写作范文：V114比较长期供职同一单位和频换工作的优缺点
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雅思较少有这种对比两方面好坏的题型，一般要求你就一种事情说出其好坏或两种观点让你选择其一。不管真正题目如何，观点都没有区别。如果真正题目和大家的回忆有所不同，我将重新修正。
----广州IELTS考试中心专职写作老师赖劲松。
Version 114 Some people prefer to stay in the same job for the same company,
but others prefer to change jobs frequently. You should use specific reasons
to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.
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Introduction( 20 words)
Nowadays very few people intend to go in for a life-time career. Still there
are some advantages to doing so.
Body1( 99 words)
Merits of always taking a position can be examined by three aspects.(topic
sentences) First, if you stick at taking a post, all angles of the job will
have appeared; after some time,you will definitely have a good command of it.
Consequently you may become a veteran of the field and earn respect or
prestige from others. Second, you can establish an extensive social
connections relating to the field, helping you tear down most of the barriers
standing in the way of your working endeavor. Finally, mistakes of the
routine tasks would be minimized because you have learned the lessons.
Body2 (111 words)
On the other hand, I would like to illustrate the advantages of experiencing
different jobs. (topic sentence) Initially, we look at the issue of bribery.
Many high-level staff are inclined to accept bribes via power in hand.
However, if he knows that someone else will soon take his place, such acts
can be avoided. We then look at work motivation.
If one works for the same company for a long time without promotion, he may
get sick and tired of doing the same daily routine. Nonetheless, a manager
should have qualities of a sense of teamwork and the capability of
coordination. Therefore, to try various positions can help you gain ground to
be promoted.
Conclusion ( 67 words)
In summary, staying in the same post can cultivate one to cut out for the job
but involve one in a boring career while changing jobs frequently can be both
advantageous by keeping bribery away and providing one with more
opportunities of promotion and disadvantageous by making mistakes
occasionally. In my opinion, people should seek a decent and good-paid job
and pay little attention to changing it.
写作范文：动物保护v104,v115
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原创：孙肇春
Version 104
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. Some people think that
preventing these wild animals from dying out is a waste of resource. To what
extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Biological diversity has never been so threatened as it is today as a result
of the process of human civilization. The various forms of pressure created
by human activity have destroyed natural balance, led to the deterioration of
natural habitats, genetic erosion and the rarity, even disappearance, of a
number of plant and animal species.
As the pace of civilization accelerates, more people, taking more space,
needing to use more natural resources, engaging in ever-growing consumption,
impose severe deterioration on the habitat of animals. An increasing number
of people come to realize that the disappearance of animals will result in
serious threat to the equilibrium of ecosystem. Simply put, the extinction of
hawks, a rat-eating bird seen in many regions, will result in the rapid
propagation of rats. And rats, further, will destroy the prairies and
threaten the other animals like gazelles, zebras and others, who live on
grass and green lands. The coexistence of animals and human beings creates
perfect harmony and brings about the vividness to our planet.
It is hard to imagine what our world would be like without animals.
Sociologists also point out that the disappearance of animals can cause
social and economic problems. Animal trade, as a supporting sector to the
world economy, was very active before. However, the situation is beyond
control since animal trade is very profitable and alluring. Many species
cannot escape the adversity of being killed.
Certainly, our diet cannot be without meat. There are living stocks, which
can provide us with sufficient and nutritious produce. Therefore, we need not
to resort to wild animals, especially the endangered ones. To protect animals
is to protect our living environment. Every individual should join efforts to
keep the diversity of animals. (288 words)
写作范文参考之V108
原创：孙肇春
Version 108
The gap of living in cities and the countryside is larger and larger. What
are the reasons in your country and how to reduce the differences?
As the step of economic development accelerates, the gap between the city and
the countryside becomes more and more overt, which arouses colossal concerns.
Take a further look at the phenomenon, there are three major causes.
Firstly, the insufficiency of investment in the rural areas accounts mainly
for the issue. China, for example, covers a very large area. Due to the
emphasis on the development in the coastal areas, the government devotes more
investment in the large cities, such as Shanghai, Beijing and Guangzhou. The
investment, undoubtedly, is repaid by the threefold increase of economy and
commerce in these cities. However, this is not the case in the rural areas
and the western regions. The lack of investment barriers the productivity and
economic development and sharpens the gap between the city and the
countryside.
Secondly, the low education level in the rural areas contributes partly to
the gap of living. Education is the prime force of productivity. Keeping this
in mind, many countries and governments give priority to the development of
education. China’s education witnessed a rapid growth in the past decade.
However, the education level in the countryside still keeps very low. The
enrollment of primary schools and secondary schools is much lower compared
with the advanced regions, not to mention the developed countries in the
world. Without good education, the development of economy and technology
would be a dream difficult to be realized.
Finally, the influx of migrant workers to the cities from the countryside
deteriorates the undeveloped condition in the rural areas. The life style in
the urban areas is very attractive to the people in the countryside. To seek
more working opportunities, many people abandon the fertile lands and leave
them uncultivated. If the situation continues, it will lead to serious
unbalance of economic and regional development.
To sum up, only when the government renders more concerns over the issue, can
the gap between the cities and the countryside be bridged. (325 words)
V111写作思路(推荐)
Difference between children's education
IN certain respects, children are the same all over the world. But many
factors affect the development of children, both parental support and
education being major influences. There are vast differences between
schooling styles, and parental attitudes towards children, in China and the
West.
Some of these differences have obvious causes, for example, the "Little
Emperor" syndrome in China. Parents everywhere have dreams for their
offspring. However, the concentration of energy invested into planning for a
child's future is noticeable in China, as it is not diluted by the presence
of siblings.
This adoration can be seen in other ways. One of the most common is spoiling
children, giving them everything they want. Some of the time this is a reward
for good work, although there are children who receive all they want merely
because they demand it from their parents.
Hard work?
Parents also have this tendency to spoil children in the West. If a child
does start to see itself as the all-deserving star of the Universe, usually
its siblings will tease and bully the child until it stops feeling
self-important.
Another contrast between the upbringing of children in China and the West is
in schooling. Without a doubt, Chinese children work harder than their
European and American counterparts. Their industriousness is admirable, and
in comparison, Western students are lazy. In European countries, teenagers
will often have a Saturday job, or holiday job, to supplement their
allowance. This is rare in China, where education is considered of paramount
importance, and time working detracts from study. The same contrast is true
of romantic relationships between teenagers. I spoke to Han Li, a 16-year old
student in Huhhot, about boyfriends. She said: "I have no time for a
boyfriend, even if I did want one. I must study hard, there is a lot of
pressure on me to get good grades and go to university."
The style of teaching is very different in China from in the West. The notion
of "repeating after a teacher'' seems old-fashioned and redundant in America
and Europe. Large class sizes may be the reason for the popularity of this
teaching method. In England, any class over 30 is considered large enough to
impair learning. However, I have noticed that this parrot-style of learning
is being replaced with more progressive methods of education in many Chinese
schools.
The perfect solution would be to combine Western and Chinese education
methods. Combat the laziness and apathy of Western students; encourage
initiative within Chinese students, by expecting independent thought as
opposed to mindless repetition. As for spoilt kids anywhere, some of these
children would benefit from a smack on the bum.
写作范文：是否同意均衡饮食是身体健康的关键，为什么
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A balanced diet, or eating balanced meals, is the key to a healthy life. To
what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for
your answer.
Although a balanced diet is important, there are other factors which
contribute to a healthy life. People in some cultures do not eat a balanced
diet, but use limited food sources. In addition, lack of stress could well be
as important as diet.
One culture-related reason concerns environmental or climatic conditions. The
Inuit, in the Arctic Circle, live in harsh surroundings and their major
source of food for many months of the year is fish. Nutritionists in
industrialized countries would not consider their diet balanced or even
healthy, yet Inuit people have flourished in food from the sea for centuries.
Another cultural reason is religion-based. Many Hindus are vegetarians
because of their religion. Again, many dieticians claim that vegetarianism is
unbalanced because humans need protein, especially from animals. Hindus,
however, seem to be quite healthy, suffering no ill effects from the lack of
animal protein.
The major reason for disagreeing with the balanced diet argument, however, is
to do with stress. Even though people in the past did not always have a
balanced diet, something existing only on potatoes and bread, they lived
healthy lives because there afflicts urban residents today. Secondly, there
is a large percentage of contemporary people who do their jobs, then relax in
front of the TV, and quite often eat junk food. But seem healthy enough. They
may be spared disease by their relatively stress-free lives.
In conclusion, although it is undeniable that a balanced diet is of some
importance to health, there are no doubt more factors that may get involved
in affecting people’s health. For example, in terms of living environment,
climate and stress in them.
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