作文题目:

 

　　a campus activity that has benefited you most. state the reasons at least 120 No more than 180 words.

 

　　参考范文：

 

　　沪江网校版：

 

　　​University is a place that provides a number of interesting activities to enrich our life on campus. In the two years, I have attended a couple of activities such as football club and reading society. The most benefited one popping into my mind is the sports meeting last month.

 

　　First of all, sports meeting offers a great opportunity to draw students’ attention from busy studies to the sports field. As students, most of our time is killed in the classroom and library. However, doing sports could be seen as a relaxing ingredient in tedious study life.

 

　　Secondly, as a member of football club, I attended the football game that day. I enjoyed the feeling of being united. During the game, we encouraged each other when we felt frustrated; we cheered for each other when we scored a goal. All these taught me to be more and more team-oriented.

 

　　Lastly, doing sports benefits to our physical health. Increasingly sedentary lifestyle causes laziness and possibility of obesity. Therefore, this sports meeting on campus mobilized our students to enjoy the fun of sports.

 

　　This is the campus activity that has benefited not only me but also most of the students.

 

　　新东方在线版1：

 

　　The Most Impressive Campus Activity

 

　　Every university offers numerous kinds of activities to enrich students’ extracurricular life. As one of the young college students, I have benefited a lot from all of these well-organized activities, but the one impressing me most is the debate competition which I took part in last year.

 

　　That was a debate competition between different majors and the topic was about theoretical knowledge versus practices. What mattered most is not the result of the debate, but gathering background information and practicing the process of debate. Also, no individual could accomplish the challenging task all by herself or himself, so joint efforts have played a significant role in winning the competition. Team spirit and co-operation has been improved a lot and I believe this is more precious than winning or losing.

 

　　To be brief, we should participate in more campus activities, not only can we get a better understanding of what we have learnt before, but also make new friends and discover our interests.

 

　　写作思路指导：

 

　　第一步，确定你印象最深的校园活动是什么。

 

　　第二步，该校园活动主题和内容是什么。

 

　　第三步，活动的启发和影响。

 

　　题型不再局限于纯粹的议论文，而是各个文章体裁夹杂和糅合。要对文章的体裁和相应写法有全面的理解和掌握。

 

　　新东方在线版2：

 

　　Currently, students in mounting numbers pay attention to academic achievement, neglecting campus activities, like speaking contest , song contest and its like. However, from my perspective, we youngsters should take participate in more campus activities.

 

　　I hold the notion that campus activities has lots of benefits on various fronts. At the top of the list, social activities, such as song contest could help us make more friends, expanding our acquaintances. In addition, students would widen horizon, increase knowledge during the period taking part in campus activities. Last but not list, just as a saying goes, “ all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”; therefore, students’ choice to join in some school activities would ease our mind and relief our burden, which will be beneficial to the study.

 

　　In conclusion, youngsters should take part in colorful and meaningful activities at campus. Hence, I suggest schools can hold some activities to cultivate students ability, physically and psychologically.

 

　　(沈阳新东方学校-吴欣慰老师)

 

　　文都教育版1：

 

　　The Campus Activity that Has Benefited Me Most

 

　　As a coin has two sides,when it comes to “what campus activity that has benefited you most”,different people may have different opinions.As far as I am concerned,it is the psychological composition competition that has benefited me most.

 

　　There are,to my mind,plenty of shaping factors,among which,the following ones are particularly worth mentioning.One of the most valuable one is it is the field that I like.I can find a place to say something,either to the world or to myself,which will make me feel relax,get a good mood and enjoy myself.Another fundamental one which should not be neglected is I can appreciate others’ merits and find my own weakness,and then make up for it.Last but not least,I can find people who have the same thinking and interest with me,and become friends.Take myself for instance,it is in the psychological composition competition that I find my soul mate.

 

　　Judging from the reams of evidence,it is safe for me to conclude that psychological composition competition is the campus activity that has benefited me most.If it had not been for it,I could not have enjoyed myself so much.

 

　　范文译文

 

　　正如一块硬币具有两面性一样，当问到“什么校园活动让你最受益”的时候，不同的人会有不同的观点。就我而言，我认为使我最受益的活动是心理征文比赛。

 

　　在我看来，有很多原因让我形成这个观点。其中，下面这些原因是最值得一提的。首先，也是最有价值的是因为这是我喜欢的领域。在这里我可以找到一个地方来倾吐自己的心声，可能是对世界的，也可能是对自己的。这样我就会觉得很轻松，有一个好的心情，并享受自己的生活。另外一个不能忽视的重要原因是，在这里我能欣赏到别人的优点，发现自己的缺点并进行弥补。最后，我可以在这个比赛中找到和我有同样的思想和兴趣的人，并成为好朋友。就拿我自己来说，我就是在心理征文比赛中找到了自己的知己。

 

　　根据上面提出的证据，我得出“心理征文比赛使我最受益”这个结论是很合理的。要是没有这个活动，我不能如此的热爱我的生活。

 

　　文都教育版2：

 

　　The Most Beneficial Activity in My Campus

 

　　It is well known that university is greatly different from high school mainly due to that university will hold a large number of activities, which benefits college students a lot. From my perspective, the most beneficial one is “Long-distance Running for Love” organized by the Students Union when I am a freshman. The money collected by this activity is contributed to Project Hope.

 

　　It is really my honor to participate the long running, because it benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind. To begin with, the activity reminds me of the great importance of physical health. Before I go to college, I only focus on academic achievements while the physical health misses my attention. But, the long-running tells me in time that a sound mind lies in a sound body. Additionally, during my participation in this activity, I am informed well that there are still many children in rural areas who have to drop out of school because of impoverished families. Thus, for one thing, I fully realize the great importance of helping them fulfill their dreams. For another thing, I cherish the opportunity to study in university more, for when compared with those children in poverty-stricken areas, we should harbor a grateful heart.

 

　　By and large, although I have taken part in many campus activities, I deem the long running for love most beneficial to me. And I am looking forward to that more wonderful and meaningful activities will be held in our campus.

 

　　范文译文：

 

　　众所周知，大学与高中截然不同，主要原因是大学里会举办很多校园活动，而这些大学活动使大学生受益匪浅。我认为最有益的校园活动是大一时，由学生会举办的“爱心长跑”。这次长跑筹集的善款用于捐助希望工程。

 

　　我很荣幸参加了这次长跑，因为这次活动使我的身心都获得了很大裨益。首先，这次活动提醒我身体健康的重要性。在我上大学前，我只关心自己的学习成绩，而忽视了健康。但是，这次长跑及时提醒我——健康的身体孕育健康的灵魂。此外，通过参加此次长跑，我深刻了解到还有许多偏远山区的小孩因为家庭贫困被迫辍学。因此，一方面我充分意识到帮助这些小孩实现梦想是何其重要;另一方面，我更珍惜自己能上大学的机会。因为，和那些贫困地区的小孩相比，我们应该怀有一颗感恩的心。

 

　　总体而言，虽然我参加过许多校园活动，但是我认为这次爱心长跑最为有益。我也期待有更多精彩而有意义的校园活动举行。