【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以盗版为主题的议论文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：提出盗版现象日益严重，给社会带来不利影响；

展开话题：从三方面分析造成这种现象的原因；

话题结论：说明自己的看法，努力打击盗版。

 

【作文背诵范文】

On Piracy

 

Recently, piracy has become a hot topic under discussion. There are many pirated goods in our market, such pirated videos, software，and tapes, which may bring great profits to the merchants and at the same time save some money for the buyers in the short term. However, negative effects have been clearly seen on the development of the industry involved.

最近，盗版成为讨论的热门话题。市场上有许多盗版商品，例如盗版光盘、软件和磁带，这些可能给商家带来很大利润，同时，短期内也为购买者节省了一些钱。然而，已经在相关行业的发展中清晰地看到了它的负面影响。

 

Many reasons may account for the widespread piracy in China. The main reason is that pirates may get enormous profits through their illegal activities, which is to some extent a theft of other's labor. Next，the pirated goods have a huge potential market. Where there is demand, there is sure to have suppliers. At last, we still lack a perfect supervising system. As a result, few effective methods could be found to cope with the problem.

盗版在中国的盛行有许多原因。主要是因为盗版者可以通过他们的非法行为获得巨额利润，这种非法行为某种程度上是对他人劳动的剩窃。其次，盗版商品有巨大的潜在市场。有需求的地方，自然就会有供应者。再者，我们仍旧缺乏完善的监督机制。因此，几乎找不到有效的方法可以处理这一问题。

 

In my opinion, piracy will exist for a long time in China. For one thing, most common people still want to buy cheap pirated products. For another, few effective measures have been found to prevent piracy by now. We still need to make efforts to deal with piracy as it did hinder the development of our industry and has caused many conflicts between China and other nations. (203 words)

依我看来，盗版在中国还会存在很长时间。首先，大部分普通人仍然想要买

便宜的盗版产品。其次，迄今为止几乎找不到有效的措施来预防盗版。在对付盗版上，我们仍需努力，因为它确实妨碍了我们行业的发展，并引发了中国和其他国家的许多冲突。

 

【高分句型解析】

Where there is demand, there is sure to have suppliers. 有需求的地方，自然就会有供应者。

 

点评：这句话套用了一个习语的结构“Where there is a will, there is a way.（有志者事竞成）”，在四级写作中能准确套用类似的结构，不仅能使文章生动活泼，而且也是一个得高分的亮点。

 

【作文加分词】

piracy  ['pairəsi]    n.盗版，剽窃

to some extent     在一定程度上；在某种程度上

pirated goods     盗版商品

have a huge potential market     有巨大的潜在市场

bring great profits     带来很大的利润

supervising system     监督体制

in the short term     从短期来看;就眼前来说

make efforts to     努力

enormous  [i'nɔ:rməs]     adj.巨大的，庞大的

hinder  ['hindər]     v.妨碍，阻止

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以假冒伪劣商品为主题的解释说明文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：简述目前社会上假冒伪劣商品猖狂这一现象；

展开话题：详述假冒伪劣商品对消费者和社会的危害，并举例说明；

话题结论：从两个方面阐述消除伪劣商品的方法。

 

【作文背诵范文】

Harm of Fake Commodities

 

One negative aspect of China's rapid economic development is the phenomenon of fake commodities. It is reported that these commodities range from foodstuff, clothes to radios, and TV sets and even ,medicines.

中国经济迅速发展产生的一个消极影响就是假冒伪劣商品的出现。据报道，从食品、服装业到收音机和电视机甚至药品都充斥着假冒伪劣商品。

 

Fake commodities are harmful in many ways. They have caused great loss and damage to consumers as well as to the society. For example，if someone buys some fake medicines，they may not cure hire but may probably make his illness worse or even put an end to his life. Besides, fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers who produce the real products by making the consumers suspicious of these products，thus leading to social problems.

假冒伪劣商品存在很多危害。他们对消费者和社会都造成巨大的损失和伤害。例如，如果有人买了一些假药，它可能不但无法治愈他反而使他的病情恶化，甚至导致他的生命走向终结。此外，假冒商品还可能使得消费者对这些产品产生怀疑，从而导致人们对生产真正产品的生产商失去信任，继而引发社会问题。

 

It is high time to take actions to get rid of fake commodities. First，the government should perfect relevant laws concealing the manufacture and sake of commodities. Second, people should be advised how to tell the genuine commodities from the fake ones, and be encouraged to report to the relevant authorities in case they have bought fake commodities.(169 words)

现在是时候采取行动来消除假冒伪劣商品了。首先，政府应完善与商品的生产和销售有关的法律。第二，应该告知人们如何分辨假冒伪劣商品， 并鼓励人们在购买到假冒伪劣商品时上报到相关部门。

 

【高分句型解析】

Besides, fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers who produce the real products by making the consumers suspicious of these products，thus leading to social problems. 此外，假冒商品还可能使得消费者对这些产品产生怀疑，从而导致人们对生产真正产品的生产商失去信任，继而引发社会问题。

 

点评：这个句子比较长，但结构比较简单，这句话主句是"fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers, thus leading to social problems" who引导的从句作定语修饰manufacturers。

 

【作文加分词】

range from…to…     从……到……范围

take action     采取行动

foodstuff  ['fu:dstʌf]     n.食品

get rid of     摆脱， 除去

put an end to    结束，终止

relevant  ['reləvənt]     adj.有关的，相关的

manufacturer  [,mænju'fæktʃərər]     n.制造商

genuine  ['dʒenjuin]     adj.真正的，真实的

suspicious  [sə'spifəs]     adj.可疑的，怀疑的

be encouraged to    被鼓励去……

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以虚假广告为主题的解释说明文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：简述社会上有大量虚假广告存在这一现象；

展开话题：从社会和消费者的角度揭示虚假广告的危害；

话题结论：提出杜绝虚假广告的办法。

 

【作文背诵范文】

How to Eliminate False Advertisement

 

Advertisements appear everywhere in modern society. However, it is acknowledged that many advertisements involve great deal of false information.

广告在现代社会中无处不在。然而，许多广告涉及大量虚假信息，这是大家都公认的。

 

Undoubtedly, false advertisements are extremely harmful to our society. Some advertisements are indeed misleading. They tend to exaggerate the merits of the products while concealing the demerits. Some advertisers even go so far as to fabricate information to promote their products or services. Thus, consumers might be tricked into buying things that are not at all as good as what is advertised. Even worse, serious problems can arise if advertisements cover up the side effects of certain medicines.

毫无疑问，虚假广告对我们的社会是极其有害的。有些广告的确是误导。他们往往在夸大产品的优点的同时掩盖其缺点。有些广告甚至偏离更远，为了促销其产品或服务不惜编造信息。因此，消费者可能会被欺骗从而购买东西，而这些东西并不如广告上的那么好。更糟的是，如果广告掩盖某些药物的副作用，可能会产生严重的问题。

 

Therefore, a campaign should be launched to eliminate false advertisements, which involves the joint efforts of the government and the customers. Government should regulate the contents of advertisements and punish those who endanger the customers' interest. Then, advertisers are prohibited to exaggerate the merits of their products or services. In addition, consumers should be alert to any false advertisements. (156 words)

因此，为了杜绝虚假广告，应该发起一个运动，这其中包括政府和消费者的共同努力。政府应该规范广告的内容，并惩罚那些危害消费者利益的广告商。然后，广告商不得夸大其产品或服务的优点。此外，消费者应警惕任何虚假广告。

 

【高分句型解析】

hey tend to exaggerate the merits of the products while concealing the demerits. 他们往往在夸大产品的优点的同时掩盖其缺点。

点评：这句话中运用了一组反义词，即merits和demerits，从而形成一种对比。

 

Therefore, a campaign should be launched to eliminate false advertisements, which involves the joint efforts of the government and the customers. 因此，为了杜绝虚假广告，应该发起一个运动，这其中包括政府和消费者的共同努力。

点评：这是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词a campaign，这句话的主句是 a campaign should be launched，为了避免主句头重脚轻，把定语从句置后。

 

【作文加分词】

it is acknowledged that…     大家公认……

demerit  [di:'merit]     n.缺点，短处

undoubtedly  [ʌn'dautidli]    adv.毫无疑问地

go so far as     甚至(做出某事)

misleading  [,mis'li:diŋ]     adj.骗人的，迷惑人的

fabricate  ['fæbrikeit]     v.伪造，杜撰

trick  [trik]     v.欺骗，哄骗

merit  ['merit]     n.长处，优点

cover up    掩盖，盖住

conceal  [kən'si:l]     v.隐蔽，隐藏

launch  [lɔ:ntʃ]     v.发起；使开始从事

prohibit  [prə'hibit]     v.禁止，阻止

 

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以公共文明为主题的说明文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：指出不文明现象在社会的广泛存在；

展开话题：阐述不文明现象两方面的主要影响；

话题结论：如何改变这种情况，并提出自己的观点。

 

【作文背诵范文】

Immoral Behavior in Public

 

Immoral behaviors in public are everywhere. One can find people spitting on overpasses, picking flowers in parks and jumping 也e queue while waiting in banks.

公众场合的不文明行为比比皆是。你会发现，人们在天桥上随地吐痰，在公园里摘花，在银行排队等候时插队。

 

Immoral behaviors in public bring about a series of problems. First of all, one of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our sense of social responsibility. In addition, if we keep turning a blind eye to the other people's feelings, we, in turn, will be disrespected some day.

公众场合的不文明行为会造成一连串的问题。首先，最严重的问题就是会降低我们的社会责任感。此外，如果我们继续忽视他人的感受，终有一天我们自己也会失去他人的尊重。

 

To get rid of this phenomenon is certainly not easy. I propose that we should punish those people who fail to respect the common good. What's more, stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible. (121words)

消除这种现象绝非一件容易的事。我的建议是，我们应该严惩那些不尊重大众利益的人。此外，需采取更严格的政策，尽快消除这种不良的风气。

 

【高分句型解析】

…if we keep turning a blind eye to the other people's feelings, we, in turn, will be disrespected some day. ……终有一天我们自己也会失去他人的尊重。

 

点评：这句话中活用了短语“turn a blind eye to”，表示“对……视而不见”；此外，这句话还有一个插入语“we, in turn”。

 

【作文加分词】

spit  [spit]     v.吐，吐痰

overpass  ['ouvərpæs]     n.人行天桥

bring about     带来

exert  [ig'zə:rt]     v.施加(影响)

negative  ['negətiv]     adj.负面的

sense of social responsibility     社会责任感

turn a blind eye to…     对……视而不见

in turn     反过来

fail to     未能

the common good    公共利益，共同利益

 

【作文背诵范文】

Drink Driving

 

Drink driving is a very serious issue in China. In the first half of 2009, China's Drink driving cases jumped by 9%. In Beijing alone, 97 people were killed by drunk drivers by the end of July in 2009. The deadly result has spark repeated crackdowns on drink driving and heated debates on whether offenders deserve harsher punished.

醉酒驾驶在中国是一个非常严重的问题。在2009年前半年，中国的醉酒驾驶案件增加了9%。单在北京，截止到2009年7月底就有97人死于醉酒驾驶的司机之手。这一致命的结果激发了对醉酒驾驶的不断制裁，引起了对触犯法规者是否应受到更严厉的惩罚这一问题激烈的争论。

 

There are a number of reasons for the increase of drink driving in China. Firstly, China's highly sociable but sometimes excessive drinking habits should be mentioned. People often persuade others to drink more, even if they know their friends may drive when drunk. Secondly, the punished for drink driving is not harsh enough. Many people argue that the cost of drink driving is too low, so drunk drivers do it again and again.

中国醉酒驾驶的增长有很多原因。首先，应该提一提，中国人交际广泛，但有时有过度饮酒的习惯。人们通常会劝别人多喝点，即使他们知道自己的朋友喝醉了以后可能会驾车。其次，对醉酒驾驶的惩罚还不够严厉。许多人认为醉酒驾驶的成本太低，所以醉酒司机一次又一次地这么做。

 

More severe punishment is definitely necessary to curb drink driving. No matter who the driver is, or what the reason is, any drunk driver should be severely punished. But we also need to attach greater importance to education. Anyway, prevention is always the best measure. (176 words)

更严厉的惩罚对遏制醉酒驾驶来说绝对有必要。不管司机是谁，或者出于什么原因，任何醉酒司机都应该被严厉地惩罚。但是我们还需要对教育教导加以更大的重视。不管怎样，预防总是最好的措施。

 

【高分句型解析】

No matter who the driver is, or what the reason is, any drunk driver should be severely punished.  不管司机是谁，或者出于什么原因，任何醉酒司机都应该被严厉地惩罚。

 

点评：这是一个由No matter who引导的状语从句，主句是any drunk driver should be severely punished。

 

【作文加分词】

crackdown  ['krækdaun]     n.制裁，惩罚

excessive  [ik'sesiv]     adj.过度的，极度的

offender  [ə'fendər]     n.违法者；犯规的人

persuade sb. to do sth.     说服某人做某事

harsh  [ha:rʃ]     adj.严厉的(其比较级是harsher)

again and again      再三地，反复地

severe  [si'vir]     adj.严厉的，严格的(其副词是severely)

sociable  ['souʃəbl]     adj.好交际的，社交的

prevention  [pri'venʃn]     n.预防，防止，阻止