【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以绿色食品为主题的解释说明文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：说明绿色食品越来越受欢迎的现象；

展开话题：解释绿色食品受欢迎的原因；

话题结论：预见绿色食品在未来会在更大的市场份额。

 

【作文背诵范文】

Popularity of Green Food

 

Due to its high-quality and original tastes, green food appeals to more consumers. From supermmarkets to chain stores, green food is found everywhere.

绿色食品凭借它的高品质和天然味道，为众多消费者所钟爱。从大型超市到连锁店，到处能找到绿色食品的身影。

 

Why is green food so popular even though its price is usually higher than other food? On the one hand, recently a series of issues on food safety makes customers disturbed and anxious. In order to have the reliable food, more housewives opt to select green food for their family. Green food has been labeled as a kind of healthy, delicious and fashionable food. This is perhaps the most important reason for the popularity of green food. On the other haod, with the advance in living standard, people will pay more attention to the quality of food and their raised income is enough to cover the expenditure of food with a comparatively high price.

绿色食品的价格往往高于普通食品，为什么还能如此受欢迎呢?一方面，最近一系列的食品安全事件使消费者心有余悸。为了买到更值得信赖的食品，更多的家庭主妇选择了绿色食品。绿色食品已成为健康、美味和时尚食品的代表。这也许是绿色食品受欢迎的最重要的原因。另一方面，随着生活水平的提高，人们更关注食品的质量，而他们的收入也足以支付价格比较高的食品。

 

With the development of the society, green food is certainly to hold a larger portion in the market. In the near future, people will be accustomed to enjoy the fresh vegetable, fruits and cereals without pesticide residues, artificial feed and contarnination. (183 words)

随着社会的发展，绿色食品必然在市场中占据更大的比例。在不久的将来，人们会习惯于品尝没有杀虫剂、人工饲料和污染的新鲜蔬菜、水果和谷物。

 

【高分句型解析】

…and their raised income is enough to cover the expenditure of food with a comparatively high price.……而他们的收入也足以支付价格比较高的食品。

 

点评：这句话中用了一个单词“cover”，我们知道cover通常的意思是“覆盖”，在本句中“（钱）是够付”的意思，在写作中我们要学会运用一词多义的单词。

 

【作文加分词】

chain store     连锁店

opt to do sth.    选择做某事

expenditure [ik'spenditʃər]    n.开支，消费额

comparatively [kəm'pærətivli]     adv.比较地

portion ['pɔ:rʃn]     n.部分

be accustomed to      习惯于

cereal ['siriəl]     n.谷类食物，麦片

pesticide residues     农药残留

artificial [,a:rti'fiʃl]     adj.人工的，人造的

ontamination [kən,tæmi'neiʃn]     n.污染

 

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以节约用水为主题的议论文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：简述社会上广泛存在的浪费水资源的现象；

展开话题：论述节约水资源的重要意义；

话题结论：如何从自己做起开始节约用水。

 

【作文背诵范文】

Economize Water Resource

 

The world is not only hungry but also thirsty. However, some people are still reluctant to turn a finger to save water. Some people don't turn a tap after use, while others even pollute clean water and make the situation worse. The severe drought in the southwest China once again pushes the issue of water-saving under hot discussion.

这个世界不仅很饿，而且很渴。可是，有些人仍然不愿意费一点儿功夫去节约用水。一些人用完水后不关水龙头，而另外一些人甚至污染干净的水，这使情况变得更糟糕。中国西南地区的严重干旱再一次将节水问题推向了讨论的热点。

 

However, as things stand today, the reasonable utilization of water resource is more significant than before. Firstly water consumption is soaring. The quick development of commerce and industry will consume more water for their reproduction. What's more, the great increasing of the world population also further aggravates the situation. Secondly, due to the more and more serious water pollution, the supply of clean water fails to meet the demand.

然而，当前的情况是，合理利用水资源比从前更加重要。首先，水资源的消耗在飘升。商业和工业的快速发展消耗的水比再生水资源要多。另外，世界人口的大幅增长也使情况进一步恶化。其次，由于水污染越来越严重，洁净水的供应满足不了需求。

 

As a college student, not only will I save water by myself, but also I will attend different kinds of activities on water-saving. On the one hand, I will make the best of water instead of throwing clean water away at instant. On the other hand, I will call on my friends to save water and protect water. Anyway, many a little makes a cackle.

(192 words)

作为一名大学生，不仅我自己要节约用水，而且我会参加各种节水活动。一方面，我会充分利用水资源，不会在瞬间就把干净的水倒掉。另一方面，我会号召我的朋友节约用水，保护水资源。无论如何，聚少成多，滴水成流。

 

【高分句型解析】

The world is not only hungry but also thirsty. However, some people are still reluctant to turn a finger to save water.这个世界不仅很饿，而且很渴。可是，有些人仍然不愿意费一点儿功夫去节约用水。

 

点评：前一句运用了拟人的修辞手法，把The world赋予了生物体的特征。后半句运用了一个非常形象的短语turn a finger to，表示举手之劳。

 

【作文加分词】

reluctant  [ri'lʌktənt]     adj.不情愿的，勉强的

turn a finger to do sth.     不花太多的功夫做某事，举手之劳

as things stand today      当前的情况是

utilization  [ju:tələ'zeiʃn]     n.利用，使二用

consumption [kən'sʌmpʃn]     n.消费，消耗

reproduction  [,ri:prə'dʌkʃn]     n.再生

aggravate  ['ægrəveit]     v.以加重，使恶化

rnickle  ['mikl]    n.很多， 大量

 

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以代沟为主题的解释说明文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：指出年轻人和老年人之间的代沟在加大这一现象；

展开话题：从两方面提出自己关于产生代沟的原因的看法；

话题结论：提出解决代沟的办法。

 

【作文背诵范文】

Generation Gap

 

Though many aspects of our social life have been improved, the generation gap between the youths and the elders remains and even grows wider.

虽然我们社会生活的诸多方面已经得到了改善，但年轻人与老年人之间的代沟仍然存在，甚至在扩大。

 

In my opinion, because of the influence of individualism from western civilization, the youths do not blindly follow what the elders say, which causes the gap. The young are creative and revolutionary and always go along with the trend and like changing. While the old, accustomed to everything of the past, they are hostile to change. Also with more and more different beliefs and philosophical ideas, it is naturally the young who hold different opinions from the old.

依我看来，因为受西方个人主义的影响，年轻人不再盲目跟随老人们的说法，而这导致了差距。年轻人富有创造性和革新的力量，始终顺应潮流，喜欢变化。而老人们则习惯了过去的一切，不喜欢改变。同时也有越来越多的不同信仰和哲学思想，这自然造成了年轻人与老年人持有不用的意见。

 

I think in order to narrow the gap, both parts should try to understand and respect each other, instead of trying to change others as they wish. Diversity doesn't mean conflict so long as they hold the right attitude towards the problems. (144 words)

我认为，想要缩小差距，两方应尽量相互理解和尊重，而不是以他们自己的意愿来试图改变别人。只要他们持有应对问题的正确态度，多元化并不意味着冲突。

 

【高分句型解析】

In my opinion, because of the influence of individualism from western civilization, the youths do not blindly follow what the elders say, which causes the gap. 依我看来，因为受西方个人主义的影响，年轻人不再盲目跟随老人们的说法，而这导致了差距。

 

点评：这是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which指代的是前面整个句子。这句话的主句是the youths do not blindly follow what elders say, because of 引导的部分是作句子的原因状语。

 

【作文加分词】

influence  ['influəns]    n.影响

accustomed to    习惯于

individualism  [,indi'vidʒuəlizəm]    n.个人主义

hostile  ['ha:stail]     adj.怀敌意的，不友善的

blindly  ['blaindli]    adv.盲目地， 无目的地

philosophical  [,filə'sa :fikl]    adj.哲学的

revolutionary  [,revə'lu:fəneri]     adj.革新的

diversity  [dai'və:rsəti]     n.差异，多样性

 

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以互联网为主题的议论文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：指出互联网给我们的生活带来变化；

展开话题：提出互联网的好处；

话题结论：指出一些反对互联网的意见，并阐明了自己的立场。

 

【作文背诵范文】

On Internet in Our Life

 

The Internet has become more and more common and promised to change our life dramatically beyond emails and online shopping.

互联网已变得越来越普遍，除了电子邮件和网上购物，它有可能给我们的生活带来巨大变化。

 

Its benefits can be well illustrated in the following aspects. In the first place，the Internet provides an easy access to all kinds of information, which contributes to relieve us of laborious work, save our time, facilitate our lives. In the second place, the Internet has extensively reached every corner of the world，thus people are connected closely. For example, an on-line conference saves businessmen the trouble of running all over the world to have a meeting. Furthermore, the Internet offers us entertainment and other ways of relaxation, such as on-line games and on-line shopping.

它的好处可以通过以下几个方面得以很好地说明。首先，互联网提供了便于获取各种信息的途径，这有利于把我们从吃力的工作中解放出来，节约我们的时间，并且为我们的生活提供便利。其次，互联网广泛遍及世界各个角落，这样可以把人们紧紧联结起来。比如，在线会议就省去了商人满世界跑去参加会议的麻烦。另外， 互联网为我们提供娱乐及其他放松方式，例如在线游戏和网上购物。

 

However, on the other hand, some people debate that it is also inconvenient and a waste of time as well as isolating us from real life only with the company of computers. Some people fix the most sophisticated computer but can't mend a pair of socks. Yet in fact, computer reduces the distances and demolishes all boundaries. Whether computer is a blessing or a curse depends on different circumstance and the way you use it. (190 words)

不过，从另一方面来说，有些人争论说互联网同时也不方便，浪费时间，而且只有电脑的陪伴，会使我们与现实生活隔离。一些人可以修理最复杂的计算机，却不能修补一双袜子。然而，电脑其实缩短了距离，打破了所有的隔阂。电脑是福还是祸，有赖于不同的环境以及你如何使用它。

 

【高分句型解析】

Whether computer is a blessing or a curse depends on different circumstance and the way you use it.  电脑是福还是祸，有赖于不同的环境以及你如何使用它。

 

点评：这句话中运用了一对反义词“blessing”和“curse”，两相对照，使句子表达的意思 更完整。

 

【作文加分词】

dramatically  [drə'mætikli]    adv.戏剧地， 惹人注目地

sophisticated  [ [sə'fɪstɪkeɪtɪd]]    adj.精密的，高度发展的

laborious  [ləbɔ:riəs]    adj.困难的，费力的

demolish  [di'ma:liʃ]    v.摧毁，拆除

facilitate  [fə'siliteit]    v.侠便利，减轻困难

boundary  ['baundri]    n.界限，范围

extensively  [ik'stensivli]    adv.广阔地

blessing  ['blesiŋ]    n.幸事

isolate from     隔离，孤立

curse  [kə:rs]   n.痛苦的事Directions:

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以交通拥挤为主题的议论文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：简述中国城市交通拥挤这一事实；

展开话题：政府和公众采取的有效措施；

话题结论：总结上述的问题。

 

【作文背诵范文】

How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic

 

Nowadays, the urban traffic is getting increasingly heavy in China. The roads and streets are packed with cars, bicycles and pedestrians, and traffic jams and accidents have become commonplace.

现如今，中国的城市交通正变得越来越拥挤。道路和大街都塞满了汽车、自行车和行人，堵车和交通事故已变得很普遍。

 

The people and government have all realized that effective measures should be taken before things get worse. For example, the government should invest more in constructing new roads and repairing and maintenance of old ones, particularly those in busy areas of cities. Besides, more public bus routes and more subways should be opened up so that more people will take the public transportation instead of traveling by private cars or bicycles. At the same time, it is essential that stricter traffic rules and regulations be issued to strengthen traffic control and facilitate the normal and efficient running of all means of transportation.

公众和政府都意识到，在事情变得更加糟糕之前，应该采取有效的措施了。比如，政府应该在建设新的道路和修理并保养旧路上做更多投资，尤其是在城市的繁忙地区。另外，应该开通更多的公交车线路和地铁，这样更多人会用公交出行，而不是使用私家车或自行车。同时，颁布更严格的交通规则和规范，以增强交通管制并促使所有交通方式正常和有效的运行，这点很重要。

 

With such efforts, I am confident that it will not be long before city traffic in China flows in a smoother and more efficient manner. (156 words)

有了这些努力，我很有信心，中国的城市交通更顺畅更有效地运行就指日可待了。

 

【高分句型解析】

The roads and streets are packed with cars, bicycles and pedestrians, and traffic jams and accidents have become commonplace. 道路和大街都塞满了汽车、自行车和行人，堵车和交通事故已变得很普遍。

 

点评：这句话中活用了短语"be packed with",表示“挤满、塞满”，很形象地描绘了道路和街上拥挤的情况。

 

【作文加分词】

urban  ['ə:rbən]    adj.都市的

pedestrian  [pə'destriən]    n.行人

commonplace  ['ka:mənpleis]    adj.乎凡的，普通的

maintenance  ['meintənəs]    n.维护，维修

public transportation    公共交通

smooth  [smu:ð]    adj.流畅的(其比较级是smoother)

 

 

【步骤构思】

步骤1：

审题：这是一篇以知识与学历为主题的议论文。

 

步骤2：

引入话题：简述个人和公司追求高学历这一现象；

展开话题：提出一些人的看法并举例论证，知识比学历更重要；

话题结论：表明自己的想法，能力和知识来自于努力工作和天赋。

 

【作文背诵范文】

Knowledge and Diploma

 

With the development of the society, more and more people enroll in the postgraduate examination for getting a higher diploma. Most companies are inclined to hire the people with high diploma.

随着社会的发展，越来越多的人为获得更高的学历而参加研究生考试。大部分公司都倾向于雇佣高学历的人才。

 

However, is it really true that high diploma equals to high ability or profound knowledge? Some people do not agree on this kind of idea. They claim that ability or knowledge means more than diploma. Take Bill Gates, the head of the micro soft, for example, he does not have an MBA degree which is believed to play a vital role in the success in commercial life. Furthermore, Sam Walton of Wall-Mart Stores Inc. does not have an MBA degree, but he is the most successful man in the business community.

然而，高学历真的能等同于能力强或知识渊博吗?有些人并不认同这种观点。他们宣称，能力或知识比学历更重要。以微软的总裁比尔·盖茨为例，他没有获得人们普遍认为对商业生涯的成功起着至关重要作用的工商管理硕士学位。另外，沃尔玛百货有限公司的山姆·沃尔顿也没有工商管理硕士学位，但他是商界最成功的人士。

 

In my opinion, diploma is not equal to knowledge. A diploma is a piece of paper which establishes your education degree. But your ability and the real knowledge come from your hard work and endowment. If you got a diploma by dishonest behavior, no matter how high a diploma it is, it is just a piece of paper, and you are as blank as that paper. (187 words)

依我看来，学历不等于知识。学历只是一张能代表你教育程度的纸。而你的能力和真正的知识来自于你的努力工作和天赋。如果你通过不诚实的手段获取一个学历，无论那个学历有多高，它仅仅是一张纸而己，而你会像那张纸一样空白。

 

【高分句型解析】

…no matter how high a diploma it is, it is just a piece of paper, and you are as blank as that paper. ……无论那个学历有多高，它仅仅是一张纸而己，而你会像那张纸一样空白。

 

点评：这句话中运用了比喻修辞，把"a diploma"比作"a piece of paper"，同时用了一个同级比较的句型"as…as"，使得句子非常生动。

 

【作文加分词】

enroll in    v.加入

play a vital role in    v.起到重要作用

equal to    以等同于

establish  [i'stæbliʃ]    v.确定，证实

profound  [prə'faund]    adj.渊博的，深厚的

endowment  [in'daumənt]    n.天赋